Wednesday, January 26, 2011

Caroline's Story

  In my short story there is a little girl named Bella and she lives with her parents.  She has no brothers and sisters and her family is just an ordinary family.  Bella is very popular at her school and loves to hang out with friends.  Some of the people at school aren't such fans of hers because she can be a little rude, stuck-up, selfish, anyways you get the point.  Bella always rides her bike to school and  home from school everyday. But one day she never came home.  Her parents and friends haven't seen her since she left school.  It is up to her peers to help the FBI figure out where she is. 
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3 comments:

  1. Julianna CJanuary 26, 2011 at 1:13 PM

    Caroline,
    Your story seems really suspenseful and interesting. I think that you might be able to foreshadow what's going to happen to Bella at the beginning. For example, if she is kidnapped or something, maybe that person could be in the story giving hints that he/she did it. Your story seems great!
    -Jules : )

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  2. Caroline FJanuary 26, 2011 at 1:22 PM

    Thanks Julzie! I will definitly take your advice!

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  3. Christine CharbonneauJanuary 28, 2011 at 4:38 AM

    Thanks for posting, Caroline. Can't wait to find out what happened to Bella...

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